After reading "Nalia and the Potion Maker" by Queenbee Monyei, I felt that the story has much potential. In this tale a young girl finds out that she originated from a very different world, one to which she returns to confront a great evil.
I found that the constant repetition throughout the book and some of the dialogue made it difficult to follow and really enjoy the story.
I see that the book is going through editing changes at this time which can only help to make this into what could be a very good tale.