The book had promise.

This book had a lot of potential - good premise and good plot - but the execution failed. The flow of the story and the development of the characters suffered from continuity issues, too much telling and not enough showing, grammar/sentence structure mistakes, and stilted unnatural conversations. Finally, too much of the storyline was focused on the secondary characters which made it difficult to get invested in Blaze and Riley’s story. A good edit would have helped make this a much more enjoyable book and warranted more than barely 3 stars.