I'm sorry, but if you have to include a line about dancing "round Patty's pile of poo" (apropos of nothing) in order to make your rhyme work, maybe there's a problem. Yes, kids find poo jokes funny, but this time it seemed wedged in just to make the rhyme work. Also: "claws" doesn't quite rhyme with "saurs" (although, this is a British author, and maybe it does with a British accent). This story didn't work for me - a weak dinosaur "story" with a "Dancing with the Stars" theme. Hard core dino fans might find it fun, but I found it lacking.