I think the translation seems a little better to me, maybe thanks to another translator joining the existing translator in this volume. However, there have been too many spelling mistakes for my taste. I find it especially annoying when names are misspelled, so when I read "Wen Chan" instead of Wen Chao, and "Wei Ning" instead of Wen Ning, I got a bit annoyed.

Five stars for story, as always (look, I'm biased, I love this story and I will never shut up about it, no one can come between me and MDZS. Also, Yiling laozu is quite a sexy guy and has bewitched my usually cold and empty heart). Editing could have been better, but that's not the author's fault so whatever.