A review by cebun
Mafia King by Vi Carter

2.0

This is a really bad book. At first I stopped at 21% and came here and read y’all comments “how good it is”. Forced my way to 35% and no more. Just no more.


It’s not good at all. Makes no sense and the girl it’s annoying. It starts where she is very sweet and dreams about being married so she can be “free” and go shopping and what not. She goes willingly to her new “savage” future husband and starts to act like a brat. And ends up being very strong and stubborn, now not so obedient in like a matter of minutes. Makes bombs her brother thought her. Has an orgasm in 30 seconds. Goes down on a guy she just met.


There’s forced “chemistry” - randomly “oh he is so good looking, oh my God, my body doesn’t listen to me”. And he is “she looks like a child”. 24h later - “she is so hot, i have a hard on”. Random. No natural build up, just “her eyes say that she wants me, she doesn’t look like a child no more”. For real.

No emotions. Just random shit thrown out.

She was promised to another guy, but last minute given to this “savage” dude. When she sees the first guy she says he doesn’t look that good as the savage and she feels proud she belongs to the savage. Two minutes ago, she wanted to run away. She was tied up to a chair by the savage with a gag, and says “i’m proud I belong to the savage cause he is more good looking, yey”

There is a time when he takes her to illegal cage fighting and looses her through the crowd. She sees how women fight in a cage, rough and deadly and she goes to the cage door and says “i want in”. What the hell. Like yeah. No training, no nothing “i want in” in some savage fighting till almost death. Sure-sure. Oh, so strong. Oh my God. Oh, she’s so amazing *eyes rolling*. Two days ago the most hardcore stuff she did was singing lessons and now she wants in cage fighting.

So stupid.