needs work

I hate writing bad reviews because I know authors have spent a lot of time on their books. So I hope if the author reads this, she recognizes it as constructive criticism. There were a ton of grammatical errors in the book. Things like mixing up “loses” vs “looses”, extra words in sentences, and many extra commas that shouldn’t have been there. While the overall story was solid (I LOVE the reverse age gap idea with the heroine being 10 years older than the hero), it moved incredibly slowly in parts and then zipped too quickly in other parts. Definitely could be expanded upon to make the entire story flow better.