Cute overall, but I wasn’t sold on the relationship beyond their sexual chemistry (good lord. Communication), and the writing style was a little cringy. The two smut scenes had some… interesting… euphemisms LOL. (Also, this book did the fanfiction thing where they described brown eyes as “chocolate orbs”, I had to put my copy down to giggle😭) Speaking of fanfiction, I was going to give an extra .5, but I do not think the Spanglish was proofread?? 

Would’ve been nice to see the contestants more? Only Tanisha popped in, and that was to try and stir a nonexistent love triangle. The reason I didn’t rate this low, though, is that the fluffiness and queer joy was enjoyable. I think the rapid acceleration and development of the main relationship, as well as the hijinks part of the plot, would make this great material for a movie adaptation. (Ideally not low budget, though, as much as I want to joke about this being Hallmark material but a smidge more scandalous.)