it was edited better, but there was still phrasing that made no sense. I am also see a big plot whole so far unless patched of in a later book i don't know how i missed the holes in this series from the start i guess the older i get the more i'm paying attention to what i'm reading and fulling seeing it for what it is. Now i won't say it complete garbage Because it not i do like some of the Characters and Yes i'm mad about what happen to my Favorite one but i'll get over it. i'm not sure if I'll do a full review on my blog or not still putting my thoughts together.

Full review at https://thedairyofabookholic.blogspot.com/2018/10/book-review-destined.html