This was surprisingly good. A great build up. I actually didn't skip most of the sex scenes as, by necessity, that's where most of the plot happened. Haha.

The end was both too slow and too much tell rather than show. Trust your readers to have understood what was happening in previous scenes!

But overall, a great time.

Oh - also, thanks for the line that indicated that not all people in the sex business felt like Ander did. That was the only thing I really disliked--the tired plotline of a sex worker devaluing themselves. But I understood Ander's background.