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A review by sabry90
Revenge Puck by L.A. Hart
lighthearted
relaxing
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Looking for a quick, easy read packed with hockey-themed romance, fake dating, fast-paced action, and a little revenge on a terrible ex? This might just be the book for you.
After getting dumped by her boyfriend of five months, Christian, Elle decides to get a little payback—with the help of his biggest rival, both on and off the ice, Preston. What starts as a simple fake relationship quickly spirals into something far more complicated, with real feelings, real stakes, and plenty of chaos.
This book is filled with high emotions, with jealousy and anger taking center stage. However, while the dialogue-heavy writing keeps the pace fast, it comes at the expense of deeper emotional development, often leaving the reader feeling disconnected.
One major issue is the rushed timeline. The entire story unfolds over just two weeks, with Elle going from heartbroken—made to feel unimportant after being dumped—to declaring Preston the love of her life in mere days. Given the lack of meaningful communication between the main characters, their relationship development feels shallow and unrealistic. The epilogue continues in the same vein, making the entire story feel hurried rather than earned.
Another weak point is Elle’s dynamic with her best friend, Aubrey. Instead of allowing Elle to process her emotions naturally, Aubrey acts as her “conscience,” spelling out every feeling for her. This reliance on external guidance makes Elle seem incapable of thinking for herself, weakening her character growth.
Preston, the male lead, fares better—though his quick temper sometimes feels exaggerated. After five years of being single, he’s finally found someone worth his time, but his tendency to jump to conclusions only fuels the book’s reliance on the miscommunication trope.
Surprisingly, Christian, the ex, has one of the strongest arcs in the book. He starts out as the antagonist but ends up with a satisfying redemption.
Overall, this is a light, fast-paced read—perfect as a palate cleanser but best approached with low expectations. The writing is clear but uninspired, and while the constant dialogue keeps the story moving, it hinders the book’s emotional depth and fluidity.
After getting dumped by her boyfriend of five months, Christian, Elle decides to get a little payback—with the help of his biggest rival, both on and off the ice, Preston. What starts as a simple fake relationship quickly spirals into something far more complicated, with real feelings, real stakes, and plenty of chaos.
This book is filled with high emotions, with jealousy and anger taking center stage. However, while the dialogue-heavy writing keeps the pace fast, it comes at the expense of deeper emotional development, often leaving the reader feeling disconnected.
One major issue is the rushed timeline. The entire story unfolds over just two weeks, with Elle going from heartbroken—made to feel unimportant after being dumped—to declaring Preston the love of her life in mere days. Given the lack of meaningful communication between the main characters, their relationship development feels shallow and unrealistic. The epilogue continues in the same vein, making the entire story feel hurried rather than earned.
Another weak point is Elle’s dynamic with her best friend, Aubrey. Instead of allowing Elle to process her emotions naturally, Aubrey acts as her “conscience,” spelling out every feeling for her. This reliance on external guidance makes Elle seem incapable of thinking for herself, weakening her character growth.
Preston, the male lead, fares better—though his quick temper sometimes feels exaggerated. After five years of being single, he’s finally found someone worth his time, but his tendency to jump to conclusions only fuels the book’s reliance on the miscommunication trope.
Surprisingly, Christian, the ex, has one of the strongest arcs in the book. He starts out as the antagonist but ends up with a satisfying redemption.
Overall, this is a light, fast-paced read—perfect as a palate cleanser but best approached with low expectations. The writing is clear but uninspired, and while the constant dialogue keeps the story moving, it hinders the book’s emotional depth and fluidity.