Sorry, this was just such an awkward read. Two stars for originality in terms of the story and world building, but that’s all i can give. It just doesn’t feel like this book went through any kind of editor or proofreader. There are so many run on sentences, overused words/phrases, and continuity errors. The formatting of the pages also feels off and uncentered.
The dialogue seemed clunky and awkward. The characters’ interactions were awkward and felt so forced. I tried my best to immerse myself in this world as I read but the frequency of errors was incredibly jarring.
I understand that this is Audrey Steves’ first released work. I 100% support self-publishing and new authors, but this one just doesn’t feel like it was ready.