In some parts it’s fast paced, in others it’s just repetitive. I realised quite quickly it’s written in broken English, the misspelt words, sentences not making sense, don’t get me wrong you can interpret them it just takes you away from the story.

The storyline I didn’t find that captivating, the spice was mainly MM which was just ok, they then meet the FMC who is as unhinged as them one good point of the whole book, they did engage in MMMF spice a little bit. The serial killing part was just bland with no real fanfare, yes, there were a couple of twists but nothing 🤯 worthy. 

For me if the author had got a good editor or proofreader to go through it and pick up on all the errors I’m sure it would have flowed much better.