A review by rebekahmorris
Carousel Horse Christmas by Danni Roan

2.0

This was a sappy, Hallmark Christmas story. The characters were all right, and the story line–apart from the fact that it was supposed to be Mrs. Clause who sent the ornament and tries to match lonely hearts–wasn’t bad. It was kind of fun to read once when things were crazy and hectic, but I won’t be reading it again.
There are some things that made me roll my eyes at how unlikely they would be to happen. There were several kisses without details, some “electric feels” when fingers brushed, and instant love.
There was a nativity story at the church, but that was the only mention of Christian things or what Christmas is really about.

This story had multiple typos, most of the questions didn’t end with a question mark, and there were quotation marks missing or in the wrong place. It really needed a good editor.