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A review by genuine_sarcasm
Broken by Evelyn Miller
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? N/A
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
1.0
I read this for free on Galatea.
This isn’t a “bad” story it’s just not a book or a story.
It reads like a skeleton draft someone may write to see if it had potential to be a real book. Or like an assignment in an English class where you’re word count is capped and you have specific things to hit: dramatic backstory, unexpected turn, found family, etc.
Also on some sites (was it ink-something?? I did a google search to see if this was actually a book. ) anyway, some sites has it tagged as erotica and young adult which was weird. Also, there was nothing erotic about it.
So this could maybe be a good book. I don’t think it should be erotic and young adult though. Maybe if it were the coaches of rival schools as main characters versus teenagers who can’t drive.
This isn’t a “bad” story it’s just not a book or a story.
It reads like a skeleton draft someone may write to see if it had potential to be a real book. Or like an assignment in an English class where you’re word count is capped and you have specific things to hit: dramatic backstory, unexpected turn, found family, etc.
Also on some sites (was it ink-something?? I did a google search to see if this was actually a book. ) anyway, some sites has it tagged as erotica and young adult which was weird. Also, there was nothing erotic about it.
So this could maybe be a good book. I don’t think it should be erotic and young adult though. Maybe if it were the coaches of rival schools as main characters versus teenagers who can’t drive.