This was just not what I expected to read. Initially, I was keen upon the idea. But the story just took way too long to head anywhere.

It was rather interesting to read about Elosie. But the story Just didn’t seem to be working with her. There was a copious amount of description about something but nothing really solid over the while. And that the most interesting part had been about a main character lamenting about how her eye color was going to be cut out.

If that was the main plot, I won’t have minded. But it was a tidbit of information that simply headed nowhere.

The plot just took too long to really head anywhere it. It just didn’t seem to make sense or even know where it needed to go. Or even any interesting event that kept me reading.

The story just didn’t seem to know what it was trying to do. Or even what it needed to do. And when it fails to hook me by the halfway mark. I’m dropping it.